JOURNEY- Writing 201: Limerick Poetry

Limerick


A village boy came to here for a joy

Journey to the moon on his way

Crowd of skyscrapers and robots

Nice humanity in the huts

Journey is a dilemma up and down hills lost a beautiful toy

Journey of humanity
Journey of humanity

Day 2 two – Writing 201 : Journey, Limerick, Alliteration (17/02/2015)

An example of sad  Limerick  form of English poem http://the-toast.net/2013/11/12/sad-limericks/

The limerick at a glance:

  • Limericks are traditionally composed of five lines of verse.
  • The traditional rhyming scheme of a limerick is a a b b a — the first two lines rhyme, then the next two, and the final verse rhymes with the first couplet.

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  1. It took my sleep deprived brain two tries to get it right but I loved the final result. As you said, the work is a sad limerick and the subtlety enhances the impact. This is a very good piece of work.

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    1. Thank you Ayush, for stopping by and comments that help to enhance my skills.

      That seem you are exploring the poetry. I think, poetry is the language of truth come from soul. While it is understood then no one can stop to speak all the way night and day, that is a kind of sleep deprived I am experiencing too. I went through your way of writing, that is amazing. Your journey to the poetry is safe Ayush.

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    1. Thank you so much for the visit and your comment Nico, I just tried to remember jeopardising humanity in the twenty first century from selfish business and profit every where. Your though is my strength.

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